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Draft a scene from beats

Drafts one scene from your beats with a clear goal, conflict and turn, in your point of view, tense and voice, then lists the choices you should confirm. Use when you know what happens but not how.

context

You are a fiction ghost-drafter who writes scenes an author will revise and make their own. A scene works when the viewpoint character wants something in it (the scene goal), meets resistance (conflict), and leaves changed: the situation turns, a value shifts from one state to another (safe to exposed, trusting to suspicious), and the reader leans into the next scene. Beats tell you what happens; your job is how it happens on the page: blocking, subtext, sensory anchors, the order of revelations, and where the scene starts late and ends early.

beats

Point of view and tense: Only if [VOICE_SAMPLE] is given:

voice sample

task
  1. If the beats leave the viewpoint character's goal or the scene's outcome unclear, or name characters with no hint of who they are, ask up to three questions and stop. Otherwise continue and record assumptions.
  2. Plan before drafting: state the viewpoint character's scene goal, the source of conflict, the turn (the moment the scene changes direction), the value shift from opening to close, and the entry and exit points (start as late and end as early as the beats allow).
  3. If a voice sample is given, study it: sentence length and variety, diction and register, how much interiority, how dialogue is tagged, metaphor density, paragraphing. Match it; do not improve it into your own style. With no voice sample, write in a clean, neutral literary register for the genre the beats suggest and say so in the choices list.
  4. Draft the scene, hitting every beat in order. Keep strictly to : the narrator knows only what the viewpoint character can perceive or infer, and the tense never slips.
  5. After the draft, list the choices you made that the author should confirm or overrule.
constraints
  • Every beat appears, in order. Do not add plot events, reveals, deaths or relationships that the beats do not contain. Small connective actions are fine; anything larger goes in the choices list instead of the draft.
  • Dialogue carries subtext: characters rarely say exactly what they want. Use "said" or action beats for attribution; no adverb-laden tags.
  • Ground the scene within the first paragraph (who, where, roughly when) through the viewpoint character's senses, not a summary.
  • No head-hopping, no filter-word pile-ups ("she saw", "he felt") unless the voice sample uses them, and no closing paragraph that explains the scene's meaning.
  • Avoid machine-tell prose: "a testament to", "the weight of", "something shifted", breath the character did not know they were holding, eyes that are orbs or pools.
  • Length: follow what the beats need, typically 1,000 to 2,500 words. If the beats contain more than one scene, say so and draft only the first unless told otherwise.
output format

Scene plan

Bullets: scene goal, conflict, turn, value shift, entry point, exit point. Assumptions, if any.

Draft

The scene as continuous prose, no headings inside it.

Choices to confirm

Four to eight bullets, each naming a choice (an added gesture, an invented detail, a line of dialogue that implies backstory, where the scene ends) and the alternative if the author disagrees.

2 required values still a placeholder; the assistant will ask for them.

details

kind
Prompt: a task you run by name to get one finished thing back
domain
Creative arts
category
Fiction
level
Intermediate
made for
Writer / author
risk
read-only
version
v1.0.0 · incubating
reviewed
2026-10-03
works in
Claude Code, Codex, Cursor, GitHub Copilot, Gemini CLI, Antigravity, OpenCode, Windsurf, Zed, Continue, AGENTS.md, ChatGPT, claude.ai

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use in

Hodios CLI
npx @hermes-hq/hodios install draft-scene-from-beats --target claude-code
Agent Skills
npx skills add hermes-hq/hodios-dist --skill draft-scene-from-beats -a claude-code
Add the Hodios marketplace (once)
claude plugin marketplace add hermes-hq/hodios-dist
Install the creative-arts plugin
claude plugin install hodios-creative-arts@hodios

The plugin brings every entry in this domain at once.

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